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August 1st, 2001, 09:10 PM
#1
Inactive Member
following the idea of william s. burroughs, i thought i'd try the cut up method so i took something i wrote during my lunch hour yesterday and typed it up then i cut it up and rearranged the words. here how it came out.
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cut up thought # 1
but i was all numbers
i had to worry about now
all i could find at work
a nice morning for lunch
and i'm just the parking lot
easy right now and
even the cat freeze time
much later as he come home
and i wish i could
break an ice cream bar
and she's eating out in a co-worker
blocking numbers and time
obviously it's really peaceful waiting
for tonight but really
at the bowl writing of her
would've left a can of coke
for my cigarettes if it's lunch
relaxing
would know to come
same and more
quite content been smoking
so i left
cut up thought #2
all i could find at the bowl
a nice number and more
but i was at work
and i'm just easy right now
i had to freeze time for lunch
worry about now
same morning
smoking
now a co-worker come home
as he obviously waiting
in an ice cream bar
and she's eating out time
and it's really peaceful
blocking a can of coke for the parking lot
writing numbers for tonight and even the cat
would know of her relaxing to come
but really would've break my cigarettes
i wish i could if it's lunch
so i left quite content been left
all much later
[This message has been edited by dwim (edited August 01, 2001).]
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